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In January, Elsa got new neighbors.  She greeted them with apple cinnamon tea.

It gets so cold, here, they told her, shivering in overstuffed parkas.  Snow had turned to mud in their front hall—an unavoidable side-effect of moving in winter.  Elsa nodded along to their complaints and observations, silently brewing the tea in their kitchen.  They were young; they had big plans.  Allison and Steve, newlyweds, just starting out.  They sat on the cold floor together, sipping with chapped lips.  The house filled with cinnamon.

In April, Allison knocked on Elsa's door.  We're pregnant!  White tea in a china teacup; the taste of flower petals and champagne.  The last caffeine for the next eight months.  Elsa let her keep the cup.

In May, Steve bought a carseat and a crib.  Elsa helped him carry it inside.  Flat-packed, but heavy.  Sturdy.  Allison and Elsa sipped celebratory peppermint, watching Steve fumble with wood glue and a hammer.  Her mother was sewing a quilt, green and yellow because they didn't want to know.

In June, it was Steve.  His face was stretched, too tight in some places, sagging in others.  She gave him chamomile (soothing, with a hint of earth) and sat him at the kitchen table.  We lost the baby.  Elsa didn't say anything.  She'd known before he walked in the door.

In July, they sat on the stoop, watching children ride bikes and run through sprinklers.  Elsa brought pitcher after pitcher of cold green tea.  Sometimes it had lemon wedges, sometimes oranges.  On the hottest days, she added mint.  By August, Allison stopped coming outside.

In November, Elsa joined them for Thanksgiving.  She hadn't been invited—no one had been invited—but she refused to let them be alone.  She brewed blackcurrant, for warmth and sorrow.  Steve chattered about nonsense for hours.  Allison didn't speak.

In December, they rang the doorbell.  We're moving.  Elsa bought them a teapot, stuffed with apple cinnamon and white and green and blackcurrant.  She left out the chamomile.  Steve seemed relieved.

When they left, Elsa made African rooibos (roots and sunshine and all things lost), and drank it sitting on the kitchen floor.
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For #theWrittenRevolution's Anniversary Contest ([link]): "Intense emotion mixed with something neutral (e.g. sensory perception/math equations)", and a bit of "A specific part of the day, over a span of time, to tell a story".

Questions:

1. Does the form work for you? If not, how would you change it?
2. Does it fit the premises for the contest?
3. Suggestions?


(for #theWrittenRevolution: [link])

edit 5/23/12: Because I am very dim, I forgot to mention that the contest is now closed (as of April 4th, actually...:blush:). I won second place for prose!

...and a DLD. And a DD. Holy crap.

edit 12/3/12: The ever amazing *disrhythmic has done a reading (here: [link]) for #Elocutionists. Amazing reading, amazing group. You should check them both out!
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Teatime by ~anapests-and-ink Suggester Writes: "The joy of tea is rediscovered in this quaint, though undeniably emotionally moving piece. Beautiful in its circularity. ( Suggested by `Amberlouie and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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*AnonDesu Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw man, this is great :>

I could talk about the like, juxtaposition of like, the tea and the realness, but you already know that.

The simplicity is what drives this, you know? Like, the quietness (not silence) of it all. It's subtle. Like the light floral undertone in a good Ti Kuan Yin.
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~anapests-and-ink Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A little embarrassed to admit it, but I had to look up Ti Kuan Yin--and now I absolutely must try it.

"Quietness" is very much what I was going for with this piece. I'm very glad you got it!

(and thank you for the fav!)
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*AnonDesu Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahah, don't worry about it. I worked at a tea shop for way too long, and this was the first time I really got to bust out that knowledge outside of business :P
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
Hey there I featured this piece here and just thought I'd let you know.

Thanks!
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~anapests-and-ink Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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`Kneeling-Glory Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was a perfect application of the prompt. It was not melodramatic, which is the mark of a mature writer. :) Excellent work! Congrats on your DD. :heart:
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~anapests-and-ink Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I tried very hard to keep away from the melodrama. It's way too easy to slip into with a topic like this.
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=SilverInkblot Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know I've featured this piece in my 2012 showcase of 100 pieces of literature: [link] :D
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~anapests-and-ink Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm honored!
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=SilverInkblot Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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